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Obliviatum and Death by ~A-R-Glasgow:iconA-R-Glasgow:



Imploring you now my dearest death
Will you not visit now the snow has fallen?
Will you not pleasure me with your sweet breath?
I long for your cold embrace to loosen the ocean of ice.

I am submerged in this world and beg your relief.
After now, the snow has finally fell,
And the grey edges of the world chase my soul.
Your white smile brings colour to me

And my eyes, sullener and defenceless
Long to stare upon thy visage
To gaze upon the holes, the stars
In eternal, unblinking adoration.
©2008-2009 ~A-R-Glasgow
:icona-r-glasgow:

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Fallen souls have little cushioning

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:iconbleedingroses12006:
Except the souls that have fallen before them...

:hug: Beautiful. I love the depitiction on Death. Wonderful. :+favlove:

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:blackrose: {Slave to the Beat, Soul of a Drummer} :rose:

We will not go down
We will not surrender
We will fight!


{Proud Echelon}[S+D Forever! :heart: ]
*100ThemesChallenge
:iconmissaudreykaye:
I love this, especially the line:

And the grey edges of the world chase my soul.

I am curious about this piece, though.

You'll have to tell me more.

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<3_Audrey

"She listens to the Cranberries in the morning to feel wiser at night
(...)"
:iconroxyangel22:
This whole piece is so lovely! :) I LOVE THIS!!
I am submerged in this world and beg your relief.
After now, the snow has finally fell,
And the grey edges of the world chase my soul.
Your white smile brings colour to me

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In this Chaos and burning I find a way to release, these are my words, these words set me free, This is my breath of life, this is me, in my free colored and spirited world of poetry.

Jeannie
:iconsilentpleasure:
Beautiful and touching. All the words and lines fit and go smoothly all the way to the end. That deserves big applauses.

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If you don't feel like talking English, feel free to talk to me French, Spanish, Swedish or Finnish. :)
:iconagrima:
Good. I've seen you do better though.
A great installment nonetheless.
:icona-r-glasgow:
Thanks, deep down, I appreciate that.

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Thus does the necessary angel of the poetic, arrive to save the angel of history, from dying of melancholy in a suffocating world of ruins.
:icona-r-glasgow:
Thankyou so much.

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Thus does the necessary angel of the poetic, arrive to save the angel of history, from dying of melancholy in a suffocating world of ruins.
:icona-r-glasgow:
Thankyou. I am a bit low at the mo, so I would imagine more will come.

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Thus does the necessary angel of the poetic, arrive to save the angel of history, from dying of melancholy in a suffocating world of ruins.
:icona-r-glasgow:
Thanks Tigger.

More, I am not sure there is any..

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Thus does the necessary angel of the poetic, arrive to save the angel of history, from dying of melancholy in a suffocating world of ruins.

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